Draft of Public Argument

In the post below, I will be providing a link to the draft of my public argument.

Lindsey Bieda. "Skittle Heart." November 11, 2006 via Flickr. Public Domain Dedication.

When you are editing, can you please make sure my argument is fully supported and makes sense please! Also, if you could tell me whether or not it fits the conventions of a blog post, I'd appreciate it. A copy of my draft can be found here.